My comment on a poem on Thursday

This poem, simply, is a rush. A rush in a loop.

Sin shout repent reprieve and repeat.

A pearl of thunder and a theory of everything. Money doesn’t make the world go round, mistakes do.

And the world is loud with it. To err is human is not a design flaw, it’s an undocumented feature. And necessary to continue the flow.

Forgive all the metaphysical mumbo-jumbo but the poem really rolled me.
Nice stuff…Eliza

Regards,
Spoke

and as noted my poem five now here

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