ONE

No verse to
sing
or sting
some
item or
idea
buzzing

TWO

no line to
pick-up
or put
down
a super-
model
or magic-
moment
trending

 

Three

And
No stanza to
retweet
or delete
one’s part
in culture
and custom
from
ending

 

10 Replies to “Eye Rhyme”

  1. I very much like the ‘worn-thin’ tone of this lamentation, Doug. it’s powerful, stark and moving. The structuring cuts it nicely. Accomlished. Jelous. ;)

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  2. “…No stanza…” and yet, voila! Stanzas! You make it look easy, when it’s not. I like this and it’s structural makeup. Well done!

    (p.s. Happy Anniversary, Dear!)

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