The window treatment
falls
above the smudge line
nose marked
breath’s condensation
vision blurred
growling
the innocent approach

———-

SNZ wrote this ditty .. ..today and we’re a team …so it counts to the thirty

 

8 Replies to “Scent”

    1. Thank you, thank you, Adriene!! As you may know, it’s not my usual writing style, but I had good fun writing it. I couldn’t imagine doing one a day for thirty, though, like you and Doug, et al. As for economy of language: I figure the fewer words, the less chance I’ll sound frivolous. :)

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